Little bit too much going on. It's hard to pay attention to the text. I like the typeface it just shouts circus more than mardi gras. Have you considered using just one of the illustrations or rearranging it to flow with your text? Also it doesn't directly say Gallup anywhere on the poster.
I agree with Danielle on "too much going on" and does not reference Gallup-UNM. You have "2013" "Mardi Gras" and "campus festival" all fighting for attention. All your important information is everywhere, gets mixed and lost within the background. The paw in the back with "lobos" written in the back does not really help the piece, just makes it more cluttered. If you want to add that to reference UNM try adding that to the 2013 by replacing the "0" with the paw. Hope this helps.
Too much to read and look at! i didn't think someone would use all three in one poster. the reason for leaving a copy of your original work is to take what YOU want to use. Not just drag and drop the whole document in there. For instance, the top left jester i made could have been used to fill the whole poster (no matter what size document you wanted) and it could hold most if not all the text in its arms. Take a look at the examples from Danielle and Rylen.
Little bit too much going on. It's hard to pay attention to the text. I like the typeface it just shouts circus more than mardi gras. Have you considered using just one of the illustrations or rearranging it to flow with your text? Also it doesn't directly say Gallup anywhere on the poster.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Danielle on "too much going on" and does not reference Gallup-UNM. You have "2013" "Mardi Gras" and "campus festival" all fighting for attention. All your important information is everywhere, gets mixed and lost within the background. The paw in the back with "lobos" written in the back does not really help the piece, just makes it more cluttered. If you want to add that to reference UNM try adding that to the 2013 by replacing the "0" with the paw. Hope this helps.
ReplyDeleteToo much to read and look at! i didn't think someone would use all three in one poster. the reason for leaving a copy of your original work is to take what YOU want to use. Not just drag and drop the whole document in there. For instance, the top left jester i made could have been used to fill the whole poster (no matter what size document you wanted) and it could hold most if not all the text in its arms. Take a look at the examples from Danielle and Rylen.
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