LOGO: try to clean up your logo next time. it looks like you had just typed out the word and left everything as is to rush through it. clean it up as to what it really looks like in the combined portion.
ICON: what were you trying to accomplish with the papyrus like R and the feather E? how does it correlate with the cursive cycle? I understand what you were going for with the feather, but try a different angle to make it show more of the E than the curve of the feather or the least try to balance them both out.
L: You just typed the word recyle and left it untouched. This is really weak and nothing added to it. Don't know where this is supose to take me. Where you working for a recycling company, Own a recycling facility? Also the little tail/tag at the end of the "e" looks like you cut it off and that there's more to it, that it wasn't cropped correctly.
I: The R and feather don't flow with each other. The fleather is too straighted line when you compare it with the R which has a rough outline. Am I suppose to recycle feathers/animals? Try something else other than a feather/animal product.
LOGO: try to clean up your logo next time. it looks like you had just typed out the word and left everything as is to rush through it. clean it up as to what it really looks like in the combined portion.
ReplyDeleteICON: what were you trying to accomplish with the papyrus like R and the feather E? how does it correlate with the cursive cycle? I understand what you were going for with the feather, but try a different angle to make it show more of the E than the curve of the feather or the least try to balance them both out.
L: You just typed the word recyle and left it untouched. This is really weak and nothing added to it. Don't know where this is supose to take me. Where you working for a recycling company, Own a recycling facility? Also the little tail/tag at the end of the "e" looks like you cut it off and that there's more to it, that it wasn't cropped correctly.
ReplyDeleteI: The R and feather don't flow with each other. The fleather is too straighted line when you compare it with the R which has a rough outline. Am I suppose to recycle feathers/animals? Try something else other than a feather/animal product.