Your icon doesn't need the lines at the bottom of your mountain. The TC can support it just well without the lines. The home care is ok but it doesn't fit your logo very well. Just the mountain and sun is enough for your icon or the curls and feather but together its too much visually. They could become two separate designs.
i will only be commenting on your icon/logo portion of your posts so that i can make my point faster for each set.
LOGO: try not to incorporate gradients within your type, itll create problems later on and it makes it hard to read a bit. Change your type on the "helping" portion. it disappears when it reaches .5 and 1 inch. you could always just delete it and keep it simplified. try to adjust where you keep your type that merges with the icon. it will blend into the mountain and cause more problems with legibility.
ICON: You could make the sun into a lighter shade of grey to make it more eye catching instead of blending in with the mountain and the rest of same colored objects. You could leave the second slash on the icon to keep the flow of type and icon at a much better space with each other.
L: Those spots in your vertical strokes of the font is very distracting. They make the words disappear and they shouldn't have any transparent spots when they get intersected with your outline of the mountain. The two fonts don't compliment each other well enough. try to stick to one kind of font, either a sans serif or serif. The Home Care looks okay but try working with each one to make them work together. They both however start to disappear when they scale down.
I: Make sure to group your work , some pieces are not aligning with each other and they all have a subtle difference with a couple pieces layout on top of each other. The icon scales down well until it gets to half an inch big and it gets a bit fuzzy.
Your icon doesn't need the lines at the bottom of your mountain. The TC can support it just well without the lines. The home care is ok but it doesn't fit your logo very well. Just the mountain and sun is enough for your icon or the curls and feather but together its too much visually. They could become two separate designs.
ReplyDeletei will only be commenting on your icon/logo portion of your posts so that i can make my point faster for each set.
ReplyDeleteLOGO: try not to incorporate gradients within your type, itll create problems later on and it makes it hard to read a bit. Change your type on the "helping" portion. it disappears when it reaches .5 and 1 inch. you could always just delete it and keep it simplified. try to adjust where you keep your type that merges with the icon. it will blend into the mountain and cause more problems with legibility.
ICON: You could make the sun into a lighter shade of grey to make it more eye catching instead of blending in with the mountain and the rest of same colored objects. You could leave the second slash on the icon to keep the flow of type and icon at a much better space with each other.
L: Those spots in your vertical strokes of the font is very distracting. They make the words disappear and they shouldn't have any transparent spots when they get intersected with your outline of the mountain. The two fonts don't compliment each other well enough. try to stick to one kind of font, either a sans serif or serif. The Home Care looks okay but try working with each one to make them work together. They both however start to disappear when they scale down.
ReplyDeleteI: Make sure to group your work , some pieces are not aligning with each other and they all have a subtle difference with a couple pieces layout on top of each other. The icon scales down well until it gets to half an inch big and it gets a bit fuzzy.